torsdag den 20. august 2009

holiday

i have been one week in fårup sommerland whit my father and his girlfriend and a friend.
i have been in fårup sommerland 2 times where wee living in the motel 3km from fårup.
in fårup sommerland have i tried the
wildest thing, but lynet was the funniest.
wee was also in the swimming hall.
it is the only holiday I have been on

1 kommentar:

  1. Line 1, line 3 and line 5 - write "i" in capital letters
    Line 3 "where we have been living ..."

    never write "have I" use "I have" instead

    Line 7 "wee" is only with one "e"

    Line 7 Please look up "svømmehal" again.

    Best ragards Bjarke

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